Sounds fine to me. Of course if the food really is "less than edible" then don't think I won't hold it against you (:
[The smiley face is intended as an indicator of his joking tone; the idea that it could possibly be construed as passive-aggressive is far beyond him.]
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[The smiley face is intended as an indicator of his joking tone; the idea that it could possibly be construed as passive-aggressive is far beyond him.]